Posted by Dave Lorenzo - Business Coach
I hate resumes.
I coach people at all levels on making a smooth career transition. In most cases this means helping them get another job.
Getting a job is nothing more than a sales process. You are the product.
In sales, the worst possible thing you could ever do is make your marketing materials look identical to the materials everyone else is using to sell their products. The way to get noticed is to stand out from the crowd – to be different.
That’s where my problem with resumes comes in.
Every client I meet with for an initial consultation is shocked when I tell them that they will never get a job with their current resume. They look at me like I just told them that their baby was ugly. Then they say that their friend/uncle/spouse/cousin just got a great job and his/her resume looks just like the terrible document they put in front of me. What they forget is that their friend/uncle/spouse/cousin had a friend/relative who introduced them to the hiring manager. They were not dependent on their lame piece of paper to get them in the door.
If you want to get a job with a direct mail document – that’s what a resume is – you need to get a few things straight. Five to be exact. There are five things that will make your resume stand out from everyone else’s. If you put these five things on your resume you will get more responses than the thousands of others that are pouring in for your dream job.
A Bold Headline
Believe it or not this is the most important piece of this document. You need to grab the reader’s attention with a bold statement. Your headline has only one objective: To get the reader to read the sentence immediately after it. That’s all. You want it to reach out off of the page and pull the reader into your copy. Be outrageous if that’s your style. Example:
“Who Else Wants to Double their Revenue?…Guaranteed”
Testimonials
Every resume should have at least two power testimonials. One immediately follows the headline. It is essentially supporting evidence. So after the headline above you should put a supporting testimonial like:
“Dave Lorenzo amazed me with his ability to double our division’s annual revenue year after year. I was amazed when he did it three years in a row.”
Paul Powerful – EVP Southwest Region, Acme Widget Company
Your second testimonial will come later on in the document.
Testimonials should be from people who are either well known (a locally famous, well respected business person, politician or religious leader) or have a powerful title (CEO, Sr. VP, Managing Director). Testimonials get you noticed and they provide powerful social proof. Basically you are short-circuiting the reference process by putting your best two references right up front.
Numbers
You must include how you have contributed to increased revenue or profitability and you must quantify your contribution. Use percentages, dollars and cents and comparisons (increases year-over-year, comparisons to the industry average, etc.). Actual numbers are a powerful way to make your case. Put some solid numbers below your first testimonial. You should view this as making a case to a jury.
In the case we outlined above you could say:
“Mr. Powerful was kind enough to write the endorsement you read above. In that case I increased the revenue from 10 million to 50 million while with Acme Widgets. This was all done while maintaining a profit percentage of 35% – which is three times the industry average.”
An Offer – Show them How They Will Benefit From Hiring You
Now you need to tell the reader why they should hire you. Show them how the case you have just outlined can work for them. Give them three (no more and no less) specific benefits that are relevant to them. You want to give them just enough information to want to hear more. This way they need to call you into the office for a meeting (interview). As we follow with the case outlined above, let’s say you are applying for the sales manager job at Sam’s Widget Co. You could say:
“Sam’s Widget Co. needs a revenue boost. The current quarterly report has sales numbers well off of the industry benchmark. I can be of immediate assistance in three ways:
- By bringing industry clients with immediate needs to Sam’s Widget Company
- Through my proven sales process – refined over the past 20 years. I know how to develop new business quickly
- By teaching other reps my system and developing great habits that produce rapid results.”
A Call to Action
You must include a call to action in your marketing document (you can still call it a resume if you’d like). You need to give the reader something to do. In our case study example you would say:
“If you’re ready to boost revenue quickly we must speak sometime this week. I am in the process of finalizing my career decision and I know I can provide Sam’s Widget Co. with significant value. I will call your office on Tuesday at 10AM to schedule an appointment. Please ask your assistant <insert assistant’s actual name in here for extra points> to help me schedule the meeting.”
Finally you add your second testimonial below the call to action. In our case it would look like this:
“Working with Dave Lorenzo was one of the highlights of my career. He was a co-worker and a friend. He made everyone around him better.” Joe Salesman – Acme Widget Sales Professional
If your put it all together here is what it looks like:
Who Else Wants to Double their Revenue?…Guaranteed
“Dave Lorenzo amazed me with his ability to double our division’s annual revenue year after year. I was amazed when he did it three years in a row.” Paul Powerful – EVP Southwest Region, Acme Widget Company
Mr. Powerful was kind enough to write the endorsement you read above. In that case I increased the revenue from 10 million to 50 million while with Acme Widgets. This was all done while maintaining a profit percentage of 35% – which is three times the industry average.
Sam’s Widget Co. needs a revenue boost. The current quarterly report has sales numbers well off of the industry benchmark. I can be of immediate assistance in three ways:
- By bringing industry clients with immediate needs to Sam’s Widget Company
- Through my proven sales process – refined over the past 20 years. I know how to develop new business quickly
- By teaching other reps my system and developing great habits that produce rapid results
If you’re ready to boost revenue quickly we must speak sometime this week. I am in the process of finalizing my career decision and I know I can provide Sam’s Widget Co. with significant value. I will call your office on Tuesday at 10AM to schedule an appointment. Please ask Jane to help me schedule the meeting.
“Working with Dave Lorenzo was one of the highlights of my career. He was a co-worker and a friend. He made everyone around him better.” Joe Salesman – Acme Widget Sales Professional
Keep in mind that you’ll want to format the document so that it looks pretty.
I know what you’re thinking, that’s not really a resume. Well, remember what I said at the beginning? People feel this need to send a resume – so call this what ever you want. This is the tool that will get you the interview that will land you that dream job.